Screams of Silence ...Tim Chambers

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Friday, 01-Jul-2005 10:54:58

Begone ye screams of silence,harbingers of pain..cloaked in isolation,you mock in harsh diadain.My soul is torn asunder,I curse you, God of hell.As you pierced my tortured mind ,what horrors I befell.You spoke of quiet solitude, to tempt me to your lair.Then lanced me in my troubled heart, to depths of dark despair. Nemesis, I beg of thee rise up in righteous ire.
Protect me from Tisiphone, from hell's eternal fire. With all my voice I scream to you, protect me from the night. Alas, in forlorn desperation, I journey to the light.Banished to mind's Coventry,I heed the demon's call. Beckoned to the silent screams, I enter Dante's hall.

Post 2 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Tuesday, 05-Jul-2005 4:17:38

It's great. You have a great writing style, honestly. I like it.